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[再支持]《静夜思》的六种译法 - 酒旗风 - 2004-6-27
静夜思
床前明月光 疑是地上霜
举头望明月 低头思故乡
On A Quiet Night
I saw the moonlight before my couch,
And wondered if it were not the frost on the ground.
I raised my head and looked out on the mountain moon,
I bowed my head and thought of my far-off home.
S. Obata
Night Thoughts
I wake, and moonbeams play around my bed,
Glittering like hoar-frost to my wandering eyes;
Up towards the glorious moon I raise my head,
Then lay me down-and thoughts of home arise.
Herbert A. Giles
The Moon Shines Everywhere
Seeing the Moon before my couch so bright
I thought hoar frost had fallen from the night.
On her clear face I gaze with lifted eyes:
Then hide them full of Youth's sweet memories.
W.J.B. Fletcher.
In the Quiet Night
So bright a gleam on the foot of my bed-
Could there have been a frost already?
Lifting myself to look, I found that it was moonlight.
Sinking back again, I thought suddenly of home.
Witter Bynner
Night Thoughts
In front of my bed the moonlight is very bright,
I wonder if that can be frost on the floor?
I lift up my head and look at the full moon, the dazzling moon.
I drop my head, and think of the home of old days.
Amy Lowell
Thought in a Tranquil Night
Athwart the bed
I watch the moonbeams cast a trail
So bright, so cold, so frail,
That for a space it gleams
Like hoar-frost on the margin of my dreams
I raise my head, ----
The splendid moon I see:
Then droop my head,
And sink to dreams of thee----
My fatherland, of thee!
L. Cramner-byng
- 酒旗风 - 2004-6-27
我是看不懂的，抄得。
天下文章一大抄
- 外外豆 - 2004-6-27
The Moon Shines Everywhere
Seeing the Moon before my couch so bright
I thought hoar frost had fallen from the night.
On her clear face I gaze with lifted eyes:
Then hide them full of Youth's sweet memories.
W.J.B. Fletcher.
我认为蛮不错的
- 酒旗风 - 2004-6-27
没看懂,但看起来不错,有很多生词一定是好的
原创 - 狐狸大仙 - 2004-6-28
the thoughts beneath the touching of the moon
when i stand up in that night
i saw the bewilderment of the moonlight
so tremble of my eye
maybe it must be the moon
whose vivid voice tell me
what is homesick like
- 狐狸大仙 - 2004-6-28
瞎写的，大家多包涵
- 陶冶 - 2004-6-28
还是中国的诗省事
- 酒旗风 - 2004-6-29
引用：Originally posted by 狐狸大仙 at 2004-6-28 07:12 PM:
the thoughts beneath the touching of the moon
when i stand up in that night
i saw the bewilderment of the moonlight
so tremble of my eye
maybe it must be the moon
whose vivid voice tell me
w ...
这么强，自己写诗，斑竹快来呀，高手来了我们顶不住了
- ◣落花隨水 - 2004-6-29
引用：Originally posted by 酒旗风 at 2004-6-29 10:50 AM:
这么强，自己写诗，斑竹快来呀，高手来了我们顶不住了
没事没事,天外有天.人外有人。我本来就才疏学浅.懂得东西少之又少,凭我这点水平可能解答不了大家的疑难问题,幸亏有狐仙大哥帮忙.我才能应付.我的主要职责是为大家搭建一个学习和交流的平台.希望大家多多支持这里,希望大家英语都顶呱呱~
- 酒旗风 - 2004-7-1
我也来句原创的诗：
Oh,my english is poor!
Oh,your english is also poor!
Oh,our english are all poor!
怎么样诗如其人吧